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Original poem is here with the reason why I wrote it For those of you who suffer .. "For Those Of You Who Suffer ..."

Are you struggling from pain, one of the fallen.
A warrior to the world, a defeated body full of pain on the inside.
A disruption in life, making you feel weak and vulnerable.
Treatment, a life extension, making you disappear for the world outside.

Medication given, not making it any better, the end is still near.
Another young life has fallen into the depths of endless agony.
Family is lost, not able to help, only to see their beloved ones wither away.
A lot of false hope floating through life, a scenery of unhumanity.

For those of you who suffer, we salute you.
For those of you who suffer, w


"For Those Of You Who Suffer ..."

Are you struggling from pain, one of the fallen.
A warrior outside, a defeated pile of pain on the inside.
A disruption inside, making you feel weak and vulnerable.
Medicine working as a life extension, making you disappear for the world outside.

The medicine, not making it any better, the end is still near.
Another young life has fallen into the depths of endless suffer.
Family is lost, not able to help, only to see their beloved ones wither away.
A lot of false hope is floating through life, it is only making things rougher.

For those of you who suffer, we salute you.
For those of you who suffer, we respect you.
For those of you who suffer, we honour you.
For those of you who die, we hope you have peace at last.

When the day arrives for you to go, a moment of silence passes by.
All seems well in these moments before the storm comes and takes, takes it hard and graceless.
Family and friends come to pay their last respects, wishing you rest, peace and love.
There you go, peace at last, a moment of pain, then silence and darkness.

No more pain
No more fight
No more restrain
Only rest at your last flight


"...And Fly Away To Rest In Peace Forever"

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WinterLeave Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you
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The-Last-Dragon Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010  Student General Artist
This caught me by surprise.
I felt my eyes stinging as I read this!
You have touched my heart with your art.
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:wow: thank you very much for your kind words :hug: and also for the :+fav:
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namenotrequired Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Een paar kleine correcties;

3de regel: "A disruption" en "vulnerable"
4de regel: "disappear"
8ste regel: "A lot"
12de regel: "die" (je hebt het over 'those', dus meervoud)

Hoop dat je er wat aan hebt.:D
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Dank je wel, ik ga het straks thuis gelijk aanpassen.

Ik dacht bij regel 12, omdat het om meerdere leidende mensen gaat, dat het dus meervoud moest zijn. "Voor diegene die lijdt en sterft..." hmm zo klinkt het logischer. Tja, spelling afentoe :o
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namenotrequired Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Graag gedaan :)

Ja, maar je hebt het niet over 'diegene' maar over 'diegenen'! :D
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
OK, diegene is dan "They" denk ik dan?
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namenotrequired Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Hmm... als je in het Engels zou proberen het enkelvoud te maken zou het iets worden als "For the one of you who..." en dat klinkt best raar ten opzichte van de rest... als ik jou was zou ik het meervoud houden.^^;
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hahaha, gaat ik ook zeker doen :D
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namenotrequired Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
:highfive:
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:XD:
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Player-Designer Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
This song is very touching, well done.
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much, don't know if it will be a song though.

And thank you for the :+fav:
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DeviantMary Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Diep, mooi, brought tears to my eyes. Zal behoorlijk emotionele tijd zijn geweest (en waarschijnlijk nog steeds wel)
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Ja de hele dag was emotioneel. Hij had zelf bijvoorbeeld geen kinderen, maar kinderen van zijn eerste vriendin die noemde hem papa, dat was tijdens de begrafenis een heftig moment.

De problematiek binnen onze familie, aan beide kanten, ligt toch wel in het feit dat alles en iedereen wat bij ons sterft, sterft aan kanker, wat voor een soort dan ook, elke keer dat zelfde vervelende woord.
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DeviantMary Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Dat kan ik me dan voorstellen, zeker als er kinderen in het spel zijn, die begrijpen dat niet altijd allemaal. Maar uberhaupt natuurlijk heftig.

Ouch, da's inderdaad wel heel vervelend, alsof het je familie opzoekt ofzo. De dood komt altijd pijnlijk aan, maar als het altijd maar door dezelfde soort ziekte is...
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Ja, maar we laten ons niet zomaar de kist in jagen, we gaan door, zoals zij van ons verwachten, niet bij de pakken gaan zitten en doorgaan :D
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DeviantMary Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Precies en groot gelijk! Wat heb je anders nog aan je leven, als je bij de pakken gaat neerzitten en erop gaat zitten wachten! :)
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Nee daarom, het leven gaat verder, als ik nu naar buiten zou lopen en er stort een vliegtuig neer, ben ik ook dood. Wat zouden we dan wel niet moeten, allemaal in een schuilkelder blijven totdat het allemaal stopt met leven/bewegen.
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DeviantMary Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Precies, daar heb je ook niks aan, het beste is zoveel als je kan van je leven te maken, en zoveel als je kan met je loved ones te delen :)
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Juist :hug:
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EncaitarHerenvarno Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Student Writer
Interesting and deep :)

Is it just me or "For Those About To Rock (We Salute You)" by AC/DC, gave a bit of inspiration for a certain verse there...?
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
And thank you very much for the :+fav:
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Yep indeed, but while making it, it came spontaneous.
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EncaitarHerenvarno Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Student Writer
Oh, okay ^^
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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mivanthi Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
DAMN.... Das pijnlijk dichtbij...
Prachtig man!
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Ja idd, was ook zeer emotioneel allemaal. Het hele verhaal erom heen was erg aangrijpend.

Dank je wel.
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marob0501 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
great work
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Dank je wel :D
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marob0501 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Graag gedaan
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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marob0501 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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TheBurningQuill Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010
We all suffer. And there's a certain beauty in suffering. This poem proves it. Congrats my friend!
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I know, well I wrote this because a young cousin of mine died from a struggle with cancer, he was 38 years old. I will place a link to the poem uploaded earlier. There is the whole story behind and around his death.

We do suffer, but not like those in pain because of a stupid life- and/or breathtaking decease or virus :(

Thank you very much :) Also for the :+fav:
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