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For Those Who Suffer And .... by Tap-Photo-and-Co For Those Who Suffer And .... by Tap-Photo-and-Co
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Original poem is here with the reason why I wrote it For those of you who suffer .. "For Those Of You Who Suffer ..."

Are you struggling from pain, one of the fallen.
A warrior to the world, a defeated body full of pain on the inside.
A disruption in life, making you feel weak and vulnerable.
Treatment, a life extension, making you disappear for the world outside.

Medication given, not making it any better, the end is still near.
Another young life has fallen into the depths of endless agony.
Family is lost, not able to help, only to see their beloved ones wither away.
A lot of false hope floating through life, a scenery of unhumanity.

For those of you who suffer, we salute you.
For those of you who suffer, w


"For Those Of You Who Suffer ..."

Are you struggling from pain, one of the fallen.
A warrior outside, a defeated pile of pain on the inside.
A disruption inside, making you feel weak and vulnerable.
Medicine working as a life extension, making you disappear for the world outside.

The medicine, not making it any better, the end is still near.
Another young life has fallen into the depths of endless suffer.
Family is lost, not able to help, only to see their beloved ones wither away.
A lot of false hope is floating through life, it is only making things rougher.

For those of you who suffer, we salute you.
For those of you who suffer, we respect you.
For those of you who suffer, we honour you.
For those of you who die, we hope you have peace at last.

When the day arrives for you to go, a moment of silence passes by.
All seems well in these moments before the storm comes and takes, takes it hard and graceless.
Family and friends come to pay their last respects, wishing you rest, peace and love.
There you go, peace at last, a moment of pain, then silence and darkness.

No more pain
No more fight
No more restrain
Only rest at your last flight


"...And Fly Away To Rest In Peace Forever"

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WinterLeave Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you
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The-Last-Dragon Nov 19, 2010  Student General Artist
This caught me by surprise.
I felt my eyes stinging as I read this!
You have touched my heart with your art.
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Nov 19, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:wow: thank you very much for your kind words :hug: and also for the :+fav:
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namenotrequired Oct 21, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Een paar kleine correcties;

3de regel: "A disruption" en "vulnerable"
4de regel: "disappear"
8ste regel: "A lot"
12de regel: "die" (je hebt het over 'those', dus meervoud)

Hoop dat je er wat aan hebt.:D
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Oct 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Dank je wel, ik ga het straks thuis gelijk aanpassen.

Ik dacht bij regel 12, omdat het om meerdere leidende mensen gaat, dat het dus meervoud moest zijn. "Voor diegene die lijdt en sterft..." hmm zo klinkt het logischer. Tja, spelling afentoe :o
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namenotrequired Oct 21, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Graag gedaan :)

Ja, maar je hebt het niet over 'diegene' maar over 'diegenen'! :D
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Oct 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
OK, diegene is dan "They" denk ik dan?
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namenotrequired Oct 22, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Hmm... als je in het Engels zou proberen het enkelvoud te maken zou het iets worden als "For the one of you who..." en dat klinkt best raar ten opzichte van de rest... als ik jou was zou ik het meervoud houden.^^;
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Tap-Photo-and-Co Oct 22, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hahaha, gaat ik ook zeker doen :D
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