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A day of the moon

When the morningsun joins the moon to cross the day.
The moon gently fades away, while the sun enlightens everything and everyone.
The moon is nowhere to be seen, but not gone.

When it's starts to rain, a rainbow shows himself.
The moon nearly visible, is cut in half.
The sun reaches it's highest point, the rainbow has joined.

Both sun and rainbow start their journey, to end another day.
The moon rises and makes no delay, he allready starts to glow.
The stars come up for the show.

Now moon and stars rule the sight.
The sun takes a bite, the moon doesn't worry.
He isn't in a hurry. He's there for the whole night.
The stars hang on tight.

As soon as the moon is only a thin line.

The stars know it...          ...the tree knows it too...          ...he will shine...

...he maybe looks torn...

...but soon...

...very soon...

...a new moon will be born!!!

...again...

signed

A tree
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I'm entering this for the summer contest held by #Points-Market for info look here: Summer contest

My contribution for the funny Poetry Contest. By `Flutterings

I didn't win, but I'm very proud of this one, this is my first poem, I've ever wrote in my entire life.

But the contest is over, I made some adjustments.

I've changed the bottom (signed ... ... A tree) part and the title. Now it's more like the view of the tree at the moon. He sees the moon cross, being chased by the sun and return later to laugh at the sun again. And he is telling this story. This poem of the moon.

I've changed the preview, it's made by ~InkyDinkyWho called "As the sun rises".

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Thank you very much for doing so :bow:
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~WritingxSQUIRRELxFTW Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing poem! Especially for your first. :D
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*Tap-Photo-and-Co Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much and also for the :+fav:'s
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~WritingxSQUIRRELxFTW Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's true :) you're welcome anywhos. for the faves too :)
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*Tap-Photo-and-Co Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww: :love:
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*Tap-Photo-and-Co Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww:
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~WritingxSQUIRRELxFTW Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^-^
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Mood: Love ~WinterLeave Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!
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*Tap-Photo-and-Co Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :hug:
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~my-dark-desires Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
To see it from the trees perspective is really something I almost never seen before. very well done!
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